literature

I'm leaning towards pride

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The air is full of repetition and odours
with a pre-determined brand
of spontaneity ruling each moment

When it all begins to feel heavy
a silence falls upon the scene
making room for forced attention on music

Words are whispered and yelled
and the way we deal with them
could lead to strong feelings of pride

or desperate stupidity.
A stopped to watch the scene around me and took a moment to reflect on things had happened throughout the night
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Satah's avatar
Nice... I really like the flow of this. It's like, a bit forced, but not rushed? It's really cool. Also, it wasn't until like, the second reading that the title totally clicked in, and that was interesting.

realllly like this. c: nice work.